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    dots Submission Name: Life behind your curtains!dots
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    Author: gothgirl101
    ASL Info:    18/F/Pelham,AL
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 10/41/17
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsLife behind your curtains!dots
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    How do you live life behind your curtains? Do you live it to impress yourself or the others around you. Never think of what others say about you, only you can live your life live it like YOU want to. To get advice and to give are just ways of people commanding you to live like THEY want you to live, but you see people are to busy bettering themselves than just being themselves. Just live it like you want too!!!




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      I will draw my curtain away and expose myself to you.
    I can answer you on this one because just yesterday I wrote something similar in Afrikaans to a couple of friends who dont really feel excited about it. I will translate it into English .
    Man is a seeker after of his own truth: from whence he comes, what he was, where he resides NOW is likened to a dream a puzzle that shall be fabricated from shadows from the Past that become his Reality NOW with Knowledge that is still unproven and wisdom that do not inspire the becoming I am in many ways.
    Thus do man endeavour to create his own Self Image from unstable visions long the Past and as he looks into his own mirror and only see his own Image from outside himself he still wonders where the Image of his mind is hiding. This is the mind-game which only he is aware of because his projection of himself never really takes on true-form outside of himself because man is always hiding something or from something. Even from himself.
    Man never really in Realities Dimensions fully realise that the Image he sees in the Mirror of himself is forgotten as soon as he turns a from it. Luv u jm
    | Posted on 2009-12-08 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


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