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    dots Submission Name: The happiness of love!dots
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    Author: gothgirl101
    ASL Info:    18/F/Pelham,AL
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 10/41/17
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Prose/Depressed
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    dotsThe happiness of love!dots
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    Since I am sitting in my bedroom at 7:30 i'm thinking ,not of myself but of my happiness of love."Love," I thought. "Love is happiness." Why would something this great come only come so far in my life. I've been broken hearted one too many times and this time it was cut too deep. I sometimes wish that it was not me that is broken hearted but my fear is scared. I can hear voices in my head saying,....... "Don't be scared little one find faith and don't give up."







    Submitted on 2009-09-30 12:10:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      As I commented once you do walk tall when you are down and not out.
    I remember my heydays in loves trauma relationships and can honestly say I came out without a scratch to show because Time is a cure and a wonder worker.
    Been scared of shadows? They only exist in the most far off regions of the Mind where it belongs because we also need them to keep a prefect balance. Faith is what you say you hear and the death of fear it will become because faith is what you`ll get when you allow it into your very being. Broken hearts can mend again. I like your poem from the very heart to the very Soul who listens you! Lv jm
    | Posted on 2009-12-08 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


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