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    dots Submission Name: The cry of someone!dots
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    Author: gothgirl101
    ASL Info:    18/F/Pelham,AL
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 10/41/17
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
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    dotsThe cry of someone!dots
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    As I sit here today crying I rememeber the wonderful time I had with someone. Not a Weakened cry but a strong one. I shall not turn my head and look back for it shall bring hatred and fear of not myself but that of someone I loved. As I think of that past experience I shall not cry and think negatively but think positive. And always look at the future for it shall hold good things




    Submitted on 2009-09-30 12:11:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You seem to walk tall even if you would rather stoop down and disappear from sight.
    I find that very positive. It is wise not to turn back to a remembrance not enjoyed because to fear is a sign of distrust in some-thing and hatred accomplishes no-thing.
    The future I agree only holds good things because it is still to come and you can do some-thing before it arrives. Well done again. Lv jm
    | Posted on 2009-12-08 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


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