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    dots Submission Name: Don't hide!dots
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    Author: gothgirl101
    ASL Info:    18/F/Pelham,AL
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 10/41/17
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Story/Longing
    Total Views: 623
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsDon't hide!dots
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    When you look around it is as if you're hiding your face. The world came to an end for you. It is as if you hate that everyone is talking to you that you don't like, "Wow," You think is he actually talking to me that's basically life. People go around talking to you that you either don't know or you just....well....HATE!! Some people don't fully understand the words, "LEAVE ME ALONE!!" Well don't hide...the world loves you and wants you to smile! :D




    Submitted on 2009-09-30 12:12:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cute.
    it's sweet and totally real. so cute.
    -rachel-
    | Posted on 2009-10-01 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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