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    dots Submission Name: Unbelieverdots

    Author: Siicoris
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       Something I wrote a couple of years ago and is one of my much earlier writings

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    I am the doubter, the unbeliever...There is no faith to be found here...I require evidence of your benevolence...Show me truth and I will challenge it...Deceive me and I will expose it...Wanderer and Hunter I am, seeking knowledge of the most forbidden kind...You will find me amongst the ruin and rubble of every ancient society...You might notice a dark figure in the alley speaking to the eyes and ears of the city...This thief seeks a different kind of treasure...If my distrust is in error, I hope others will remember my intention...For while I have no love for the Gods, I have no quarrel with them either...I seek only to grow and understand my purpose...In my eyes, there are no governments, only people...In my heart, there are no gods, only spirits...In my head, there are no facts, only perceptions of reality...Once you finally realize it is just you and your head, the unbelievers path will be waiting for you...

    To strive for it is a thing one cannot motivate another to do...To know its secrets one cannot teach you...To wander where it may take you, you must have no destination...To be born this way, is to know nothing else...I am fortunate to have glimpsed this world of doubt...It is like no drug I know...It is like nothing you could induce within yourself...I will only ever be able to tell you what it is not...It is like a senseless state of mind...Yet I have never been so alive...There could not have been a single question you would be unable to get an answer for...I have felt the knowledge of everything but everytime I come close to it, it ceases to exist...I am the unbeliever...

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