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    dots Submission Name: In Gracedots

    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    52/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1048/1348/375
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       A God poem

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    dotsIn Gracedots

    If God is truly Whom you seek,
    Be mindful of the words you speak.
    Be thoughtful in the things you do;
    Each sower reaps a harvest, too.

    God notices each time we try
    to water when the ground looks dry.
    What harm is done to plant a seed,
    when there are hungry mouths to feed?

    And though the cross bore all our sin,
    through Christ's travail and ravaged skin,
    it's Jesus others will think of
    when we reflect Him through our love.

    There is no greater love they say,
    in sacrifice to save the day;
    for love, in love the gift was laid,
    in grace, that cannot be re-paid.

    The Gadfly

    Submitted on 2009-10-01 01:14:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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