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    dots Submission Name: Sindots
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    Author: Erebus
    ASL Info:    16/Male/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 1/3/5
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 380



    Description:
       Well this is one part of two, its focus is on the seven deadly sins.
    I believe it is strange to me, this is the only poem I have written without careful testing, wrote it as it came to me.


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    dotsSindots
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    The Twisted Soul, Never Moving to a goal,
    Forever wanting all that it does not have,
    Evil, is the word of its life, stealing all it can,
    To only consume the material without delay,
    To destroy, to break, is its career, along its choice,
    The sympathy is to one thing, its desire,
    Its portrait is but a mirror, Its idol, Its lord, Its love,




    Submitted on 2009-10-01 01:34:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this, there i a sense of that it is just your thinking pattern and knowing a persons true thoughts is special
    | Posted on 2009-11-06 00:00:00 | by Wysperer | [ Reply to This ]


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