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    dots Submission Name: im sorry aussidots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
    Total Views: 600
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    Bytes: 509



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       i hurt you because i hurt him and i hurt myself.


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    dotsim sorry aussidots
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    forgiveness they say is the hardest thing to do
    i guess when they wrote that they were thinking about you.

    you never hated me so much. to ingore me was a crime.
    now you can look at me and not even say goodbye.

    how do i change your feelings and make it all better now.
    if i hurt you im sorry aussi because i let you down.

    im sorry aussi. listen to me. hear my heart break.
    im sorry aussi. forgive me. your haterd is more than i can take.




    Submitted on 2009-10-01 11:18:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      How on earth do you mispell ignore?
    | Posted on 2009-10-07 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      Rachi. Rachel.... I don't hate you, so that promise still stands.

    It's just, the situation has too big a list of demands.

    I may not feel the same anymore, but that's what happens in all famous tragedies of lore.

    Please, I just need some space, so that all the painful memories, I can erase.
    | Posted on 2009-10-01 00:00:00 | by Dreamer5009 | [ Reply to This ]


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