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Oozing From the Stars


Author: Old
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Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Oozing From the Stars



There is no yesterday
Everything past is
a million miles away

Digesting simple truths
the grand ol scene
gives way to the machine

We watch the sky turn to grey
taking pleasure in simple things

Words old ghosts long to say

Whatever may surface
it slowly disappears
Eaten by the worthless

Listening without ears
Stoned eyes opened wide

We watched the sky turn to grey
and as it twitched as it died

Smiling as it went our way




Submitted on 2009-10-01 13:06:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This, to me, is a very beautiful and emotive piece. If I were to change anything, I believe I would add more this piece, because it left me wanting more. However, if this was you intention, leave it as is; because it is well-crafted and an edge-of-your-seat and strangely somber work. Keep up the good writing. Drop by and comment some of my work sometimes.
Jeff
| Posted on 2009-10-01 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]


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