Description: Three days ago I bought a small, leather-bound notebook without having an= use in mind. Then I wrote a Haiku in it. Now, that's all it is for.
War Haiku, The First -------------------------------------------
30 Sept 2009
ar-Ramadi, Iraq
Somewhere else there is
An ocean with pretty girls
All in bikinis
Captain Morgan rum
Amber beer and Martinis
Margaritas, yum
Soft, golden baked crust
Sweet filling and crisp pecan
No food tastes better
Grass skirts on great legs
Coconut bras on C-cups
Bring me Paradise
I like them but, I'm afraid to say, the line Amber beer, Martinis has only six syllables instead of seven. Apart from that they are very clever and you can easily alter it.
Submission Name: War Haiku, The First
