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    dots Submission Name: War Haiku, The Seconddots
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    Author: Destin
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 0/2/3
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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    dotsWar Haiku, The Seconddots
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    1 Oct 2009
    ar-Ramadi, Iraq

    Mortars incoming
    Hit the ground, cover your head
    Wait for the all-clear

    Music in my ear
    I sit down ready to write
    Worst Haiku ever

    Sea of Dust and Sand
    Stretching in all directions
    Beauty of the Beast

    Coffee in the pot
    No one will even touch it
    Melanson made it

    Mission starts in ten
    Gear is on, weapons loaded
    Glad I ate pancakes

    More sniper attacks
    If you shoot at us again
    We'll knock down your house




    Submitted on 2009-10-01 14:51:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's strange how such a few words can bring the war so close. Hope you get home safe. Keep your head down and keep posting.
    Is Melanson really that bad at making coffee?
    | Posted on 2009-10-03 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]



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