This might seem like it's unfinished, but it is supposed to be that way, so you make up your own story.
leaves of pain -------------------------------------------
Silent tears falling from her eyes
leaves falling from dying trees
she finally faced all of his lies
more leaves falling of with ease
now shes all alone as she cries
what should we do with these leaves?
I would throw out these leaves or perhaps burn them...
The poem in general was good. What does this poem have to do with being a teen? (I dont find any similarity...) For me it was slightly too short, and it did look unfinished (but as you say it is ment to look that way). Thats all from me!
Submission Name: leaves of pain
