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    dots Submission Name: I am Reflections!dots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    73 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.41 - 226/170/129
    Words: 254
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 40
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    Bytes: 1296



    Description:
       With this revision I endeavoured to bring forth the many facettes of Life we inherited. Whether from Past Shadows been reflected in our Lives or past Light obscured by today’s shortcomings - we still share in Life’s tragedies and Life’s Pureness.
    Together in all of this – we still are Life’s Essence that need no Light therefore can cast no Shadows. No shadows so also no regrets. In Death we are One!


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    dotsI am Reflections!dots
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    I am Reflections!

    Many the Mansions
    So Few the Corridors
    So many the Rooms
    So Few the Stairs
    That lead to Perfection.

    Am I a Mansion
    With many Corridors
    Am I a room
    With many Mirrors
    Am I those Reflections?

    Yes – I am a Memory
    The Shadows I cast
    Those Reflections be mine
    That hath no Light.

    Yes - I am No Light
    I am Dark Memories
    With no Reflections
    I am neither Here
    I am neither There.

    Sense seven I am
    Yet I am no Shadow
    I cast no Light
    I am Pure Reflection!

    You are a Reflection
    Mirror of my Self
    We cast no Shadow
    Your reflection I am.

    We are many Mansions
    We share many Corridors
    We have many Doors
    We share few staircases.

    We are Mirrors
    That Reflect each other
    We cast no Shadows
    For we are One.

    We Reflect Life
    Where Light is Not
    No Shadow Abides
    We are Pure Essence!

    One Mansion
    One Door
    One Staircase
    We Share One Fate!




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      This reminds me of those mirrored candle-lights that seem to reflect the light into infinity.... nicely done.
    | Posted on 2009-10-04 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a great piece.

    It's great to look upon someone that understands that we are all shadows of someone, something, some time. At one point or another we all mirror someone or something in our past. Maybe this is why history seems to repeat itself? Who knows.

    In any case, you have a way with words. I read and re-read this piece because I think that it is great. I want to thank you for sharing, for it really has made me think.. as it will continue to make me think, also.
    | Posted on 2009-10-03 00:00:00 | by longwinterdays | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow this was definitely a unique vier upon this, i totally expected something else when i saw the subject. This is layered yet straightforward. I love it where you mention "i am your reflection" because this is so true, when we are that young we are mere reflections of those raising us and having authority over us. This was indeed one of those pieces that gets one thinking. Thanks for sharing this.

    Ps. Typo in stanza 3: "Refelctions" must be "Reflections" other than that i think it's perfect.

    :-)

    -Svw
    | Posted on 2009-10-03 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]


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