i'll say...wow. every poet sometimes forces themselves to write just for the heck of it. but not every poet can write like this. check out my forced writing and you'll understand why(loud) but i guess thats what being a poet is about. learning from your mistakes and learning from the best. so incredible work like yours (even when forced) is something that inspires more poets to work harder.
Wow, I stoped to look in on your page because you commented a piece of my work. Only to see my name on your page Well, now you know my name for sure. A great piece of poetry and I'm not saying that because it has my name in it. I loved this ^.^
i like your word choice but to me, even from those I feel I can tell this is forced. I don't know how but it does seem awkward. I don't feel the love in the words I guess even though I think they sound beautiful.