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    dots Submission Name: Loose Marbles...dots
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    Author: PiperH
    ASL Info:    17, F, Georgia
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 253/299/172
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLoose Marbles...dots
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    One by one, the marbles fall
    They roll under the door
    And I lose them all
    My head is spinning
    My feet arenít walking
    My lips are moving
    But Iím not talking
    Time just stops
    Present meets past
    It tries to hold on
    But knows it wonít last
    I hear them rolling
    I hear them drop
    God, dear god
    Just let it stop




    Submitted on 2009-10-04 20:37:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      :D I think this is great... nice grin out of it.
    Oh yes yes yes, we must sweep them back up...
    why can't we have dice instead of marbles? So much easier to stop and find when they fall... better odds, at least. (oooh bad pun!)

    Really cute write, I liked this.
    | Posted on 2009-10-04 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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