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    dots Submission Name: A Syringe Full of Perfectiondots
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    Author: Bleeding_AngelX
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    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA Syringe Full of Perfectiondots
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    Perfection. If given the choice, who could honestly say they wouldn’t better themselves? If it was as simple as a vaccine. Just a little shot, a small prick in your arm, and you were a better person? Why, then, would people continue to live the way they were? Why would they continue to squander their potential. It was a fools errand, one that we wish to correct. We are Core Technologies, the leader in biogenetic research. With enough funds, it’s amazing what mankind can discover.

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    “Is it on? Oh. Hello folks, it’s ace reporter Jean Lindall with the channel five news. I’m standing here outside of Core Technologies’ main building. As you can see by the people gathered here, the first line of CoreTech brand Stimms are about to be released. We’ve been covering the advance of these ‘wonder drugs’ for some time now and we’re pleased to announce that they are finally ready for commercial use. That’s right folks, the year 1998 is going to go down in history.”

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    “That’s him! There he is! This is Jean Lindall coming to you live. We’re about to hear Mr. Adin himself! A rare appearance!”

    “Good evening. It’s been only two years now, but it’s amazing to see how openly you have embraced both the Stimms and CoreTech. As I’ve always said, why settle for anything less than perfection? New Stimms are being developed as we speak, and I’ve got a bit of a surprise for you all. If you’re Stimms don’t seem to be doing it anymore, but you’re afraid to get anymore because of the warnings, then don’t fret. Our scientists have developed and finished testing what we around the office have lovingly named Boosts. These little Boosts enhance the Stimms already in your body for a period of time. They should give you that little extra something that you’ve been craving. Thank you.”

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    “This is channel five news reporter Tom Sells. It’s been nearly a decade since Mr. Adin’s last public appearance, but despite rumors of his death, he’s made a rather major announcement. There is to be a game of sorts at the CoreTech building itself. The prize that’s on the line is good old fashioned wealth as well as access to CoreTech’s advanced technology and use of any CoreTech Stimms. With prizes like that, it’s hard to imagine what people wouldn’t do. The game is to be a tournament, from what we’ve heard. As of right now, we can’t confirm what exactly is going to go on in this tournament, but you can be sure that channel five news will be there to get the scoop. And remember, CoreTech is Power.”




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