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    dots Submission Name: Memories of a Tropheydots
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    Author: DearlyDeparted
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 101/112/82
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Story/Serious
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    Bytes: 1122



    Description:
       True conversation......


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    dotsMemories of a Tropheydots
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    Me: I just don't think I could go though that again.

    You: I understand,.... I wouldn't want to.

    Me: I'm sorry, I don't want to get hurt.

    You: Hey I'm not pushing. You know how I feel, I want to be with you, but you're not ready and I can wait.

    Me: I really do want to try, but I'm just afraid...

    You: I know...I wish I could just beat that pig in the face.

    Me: What?

    You: Your X I just want to beat him...

    Me: Whaaa... why?

    You: Babe... he's so ignorant. He had no idea what he had. Your so affectionate... thoughtful...sincere...beautiful...and Omg...your body! and on top of that your smart, you're getting your life together, and your so talented...

    Me: So why does that make you want to beat him?

    You: Cause he left a trophey to collect dust and abused it along the way.... just making it harder for me to come and polish?

    Me: (tearing up) awwwww




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