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    Author: Beulah
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 588/414/44
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 679
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    Bytes: 171



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    piercing blackness
    of your eyes
    knowingly probing
    my haunted
    somber
    equilibrium
    with intrigue
    masterfully
    disguised




    Submitted on 2009-10-05 04:39:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      As usual, Beulah again is amazingly using the strongest words...!!

    A few strong words transferring huge meaning.. again as usual INTELLECTUAL meanings. It lets you think more and more to dig deeply in the meaning of the poem.. to TRY to know what each word (symbol) means.

    I guess, this indicates that she has got INTELLECTUAL POWER!

    All the best,
    | Posted on 2009-10-06 00:00:00 | by mohammad8682 | [ Reply to This ]


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