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    dots Submission Name: Morning Madnessdots
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    Author: KimmyMim
    Elite Ratio:    4.4 - 223/303/117
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
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    dotsMorning Madnessdots
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    Smiling eyes,
    sing me awake sometime.
    Whisper whimsical words
    with lullaby lips,
    and sweet neck kisses.

    Dance with me, deliriously.
    Again and again.
    Smooth steps
    as silhouettes
    spin in sheets of linen
    embracing early mornings’
    moonlit madness.

    Lay with me, lovingly.
    Spent souls surrender
    in sacrificial splendor
    to suns wayward warmth,
    singing sweetly,
    with smiling eyes.




    Submitted on 2009-10-05 08:19:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The circling butterflies fit... all those little butterfly tummy tingles are wrapped in words throughout the entire piece :) Nice fuzzy feelings.
    | Posted on 2009-10-05 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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