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    dots Submission Name: Morning Madnessdots
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    Author: KimmyMim
    ASL Info:    47 Female New England
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 179/222/73
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
    Total Views: 33
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 516



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    dotsMorning Madnessdots
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    Smiling eyes,
    sing me awake sometime.
    Whisper whimsical words
    with lullaby lips,
    and sweet neck kisses.

    Dance with me, deliriously.
    Again and again.
    Smooth steps.
    Silhouettes
    spin in sheets of linen
    embracing early mornings’
    moonlit madness.

    Lay with me, lovingly.
    Spent souls surrender
    in sacrificial splendor
    to suns wayward warmth,
    singing sweetly,
    with smiling eyes.




    Submitted on 2009-10-05 08:19:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The circling butterflies fit... all those little butterfly tummy tingles are wrapped in words throughout the entire piece :) Nice fuzzy feelings.
    | Posted on 2009-10-05 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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