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    dots Submission Name: Sickdots
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    Author: UnderlinedInRed
    ASL Info:    18/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 196/262/123
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 427
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 441



    Description:
       So the last stanza doesn't seem to fit in too well but thats kind of the point so don't disregard it. I wanted to poem to end abruptly, like something was wrong. I needed to reader to understand that what once seemed easy and simple gets complicated and rough when you go deeper into it. Theres a longer explanation but thats all I have to put here.


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    dotsSickdots
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    I can't feel.
    I do things
    I think he likes,
    To make our love seem
    real.

    I can't feel.
    The thoughts of
    once filled romance,
    Past remarks
    to steal.

    I can't feel.
    I wish I cared
    such innocence
    Wish you knew
    I'm sick.

    I can't feel.




    Submitted on 2009-10-05 23:17:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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