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    dots Submission Name: False Paradisedots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Rant/Longing
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    dotsFalse Paradisedots

    Taken away
    for I have fallen into a false paradise.

    With you and I together as we once were,
    together to forever remain.

    Yet reality comes back with a vengeance,
    things do not go as planned.
    Unexpected events come to light,
    expected to "Roll With The Punches".

    I cannot do so!
    For I long to be taken away...
    Falling into that false paradise!

    Submitted on 2009-10-06 09:30:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      We all want what is unnattainable. You convey this meaning so well; brutally honest. Sometimes it is just a lot easier to get lost in the fantasy, than to dwell in the abyss of reality.
    Great write, Keep it up.
    Come by and comment on some of my work sometime.
    | Posted on 2009-10-08 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]

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