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    dots Submission Name: Play time with...... Mother and Father =/dots
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    Author: MiseryMarie
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 7/9/13
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Misc/Trapped
    Total Views: 40
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 872



    Description:
       this is about me and my mum and step dad fighting over and over. it seems it gets worse evrey time. but im just a child so i would not know but they are pretty bad. im traped for now. but one day i will get out. then one day i found the most amazing guy and i just know that as long as i have him i will be fine and my life has slowly gotten better thanks to him! <3 i love u joshua!! mwaA ......btw this is a song


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    dotsPlay time with...... Mother and Father =/dots
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    She wakes up everyday thinking here’s another day.
    But all she here’s is the fighting of a mother and father.

    Chorus: here comes the slam, the yelling, and the tears!
    Her mother throws down the ring and simply walks out the door.

    The screaming gets louder, she has no one to talk to because it seems there’s no one their for her.
    That all changed when he walked into her life.
    She runs to him every time she see’s him.
    She try’s to escape this life through his heart.
    It’s a tough road but she knows with him that she’ll make it through every day.
    He is the one who reminds here of the love that is in this world somewhere.
    Then the yelling starts up again and she snaps back to reality.

    Repeat chorus.

    One day it will all end and she will be safe as safe




    Submitted on 2009-10-06 18:52:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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