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    dots Submission Name: my quotedots
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    Author: MiseryMarie
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 7/9/13
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Trapped
    Total Views: 26
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    Description:
       im tangled up in my own web- im stuck in this life//house, spinning in circles- they say i can go but then when i go to him i cant, tryin to find an escape- trying to find a way to get to him, so i can finaly breath again- so i will know i will be safe forever

    this is an accutual txt message i sent my boyfriend. my parents kick me out and i go to move in with him then i have to come back. its happend 3 times. or more. my boyfriend lives 45 mins away and we dont see each other that much but we love each other so much. i saw him 2 weekends ago for the first time in two months. it was so hard. but we love each other and have been dating for 4 moths 2 weeks and 1 day today!


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    im all tangled up in my own web spining n circles is wht im doin tryin to find an escape so i can finaly breath again.




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      This is heavy, i know the feeling of being trapped and not knowing how to escape the fray. I have felt like this many times but i have learnt that positivity wins the day and creates solutions that you never thought possible. I remember the first time my parents pushed and pushed so i packed my bags and went to go live under a bridge. I hope things pan out and lend resolution to your situation.

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    | Posted on 2009-10-07 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]


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