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Love or Lust


Author: iHaveNoName323
ASL Info:    23/M/NC
Elite Ratio:    5.6 - 37 /37 /26
Words: 98
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Love or Lust



It’s a lifelong affliction
brought along by a case of self infliction
the eyes see
but the brain won’t believe
the truth behind the door

love or lust
under pain of trust
will you be alone
or have faith in the unknown
just turn the page and see

the happy fairy tale
has grown pale
supplement with tragedy
and the time ticks away
the end was all but just.

a wheel that wont spin
it’s a game you can’t win
love or lust
under pain of trust
that is the way the world turns




Submitted on 2009-10-06 23:37:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Nice write. Well, I think they go hand-in-hand... it's smarter to bet on lust, it's a sure thing, and love comes with it, so who's to say it won't branch off and lead to the bluebirds and unicorns? (frightening thought, but you know what I mean... when you're in love, it's all just Skittles.)
| Posted on 2009-10-07 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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