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    dots Submission Name: I Wait For You dots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    19/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 153/196/213
    Words: 186
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 32
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 901



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    I wish you were with me because I can’t sleep
    And the demons of the night threaten to haunt me
    So I’m afraid to close my eyes,
    And I wish you were here to wrap your arms around me so tight,
    I miss your kiss and I miss your hands on my body so gently,
    On my face as you lay your lips on mine and make me lose my breath,
    I miss you whispering in my ear as we talk into the night,
    I wish you didn’t always have to go,
    And you’re always in my mind,
    And you’re always who I look forward to seeing,
    You’re the reason I check my phone so many times in the day,
    And in the night I wait… I wait.
    And when I open my eyes from my slumbers,
    Fitful or not- I can’t wait for you to awaken,
    So I can hear your voice,
    So I can see you and talk to you as I wait to be with you again.





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      sooooooo sweet!!!

    He'll be happy to hear these soulful words...
    | Posted on 2009-10-08 00:00:00 | by sombreanddim | [ Reply to This ]


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