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    dots Submission Name: He will replace youdots
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    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsHe will replace youdots
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    you found your new love
    i guess that is cool
    but i will still love you
    but i have found someone new
    who i hope will replace you
    you had my heart
    and i thought i didnt want it back
    now its time to give it to a new
    for ryan i am done with you....
    Mark is my new love who will replace you




    Submitted on 2009-10-07 11:47:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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