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    dots Submission Name: Bratdots
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    Author: KimmyMim
    ASL Info:    47 Female New England
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 179/222/73
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Prose/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 29
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    Bytes: 712



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    dotsBratdots
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    Determined to dissolve his delusional life,
    I bought him a pocket calendar today.
    Cover blank, blocks barren
    Spaced-out and empty
    A panoramic portrayal of his image.

    Pride-punched he plucked the pages
    one-by-one
    Ceremoniously crushing them
    with fists of combat fury.

    Realizing his clear conquest
    he looked up with a wide,
    blue-eyed smile
    then reached deep down
    inside the pocket of his chained
    black pants.

    He kindled his way-kewl Zippo.

    Side by side in idle silence
    we gazed at his fiery execution
    as failed fantasies blazed
    in a flaming revolt.




    Submitted on 2009-10-07 14:10:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Got a kid that won't work, huh? lol
    This screams some kind of parental/teen struggle... at least that is what I'm slapped with when reading it.
    I'm probably wrong, not the first time, but it's reminding me of the first episode of "Dead Like Me"... Not that it's written that way, it's just... channeling meanings... *third eye cosmos lol*
    | Posted on 2009-10-07 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]



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