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    dots Submission Name: Its When You Breathdots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    21/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.72 - 603/832/350
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
    Total Views: 39
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    Bytes: 1114



    Description:
       I love these moments...

    I want to lock myself in the vibrant part of my mind, not the prison of my solitude, anger, and hate.

    To much of my mind has been stirring inside of the dark, and I can't say that I will feel this feeling forever, soon I will see myself stumbleing in my own saddness again,

    But carpe diem...

    Let me seize the day and the moment just once,

    Everyone needs a break.


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    dotsIts When You Breathdots
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    It is when you breath,
    And reflect on everything you have lived for,
    You begin to realise how blissful everything is,
    You made it through hell,
    And still are alive,

    So many thoughts roaming as a child,
    So many moments I just want to go back too,
    Yearning for those moments,
    Knowing they are all gone,
    It is when you breath,
    You begin to open your eyes,
    You realise how long they have been shut,
    And mine have been closed for a long time,
    Perhapes too long.

    That's what memories where made for,
    Cheering you up when down,
    To create an entire world in your head,
    Your sanctuary,
    Your safe haven.

    It is these moments I want back,
    Never to look back at that cruel winter.

    Tonight I will rest in peace,
    Perhapes wake up to a new morning.

    Acceptance comes from within,
    It is when you start to breath,
    You realise that.
    You also realise that all of your life has been right here from the start.




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