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    dots Submission Name: Mindless Methodsdots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    17/Female/TMON
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 112/217/289
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 823
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 666



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       DONT USE YOUR MIND. THEYLL FIND YOU.

    that doesnt sound crazy at all


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    dotsMindless Methodsdots
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    Intellectuals see potential
    From minds like mine
    The depth and density
    Itís dangerously profound
    And they either harvest us
    As mad scientists and mathematicians
    Or lock us up in asylums
    Before we become the
    Mass murderers and general psychopaths
    That we are destined to be
    But they arenít quick enough
    To capture people like me
    Iíve been running from the system
    For as long as I can remember
    The seclusion, it just comes naturally
    Wrap me in your arms
    And make me feel at home
    Because in this painfully cold world
    I am utterly alone




    Submitted on 2009-10-08 07:26:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      :) I had to smile when I read this. You're 15. You still have time. They make a pill for this.

    Also... you're running from the System on the System...
    thank you for this revelation.
    | Posted on 2009-10-08 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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