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    dots Submission Name: You never knew me, Thank goddots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    17/Female/TMON
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 112/217/289
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsYou never knew me, Thank goddots
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    Donít despise the lies
    They were for your protection
    Donít act like you hate me
    You know I meant them
    With all the truth a lie can hold
    Honestly, but they were still lies
    And you loved
    Who you thought I was
    You thought you saw something
    A glimmer in my eyes
    Maybe it was the tears,
    The false regret
    Or my pride in the nights
    You will never forget
    You thought you could read me
    Inside out, coldly and calmly without a doubt
    And I would think that youíd find it odd
    But you never knew me
    Thank god.




    Submitted on 2009-10-08 07:28:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Verra nice. I really enjoyed this...it reminded me alot of my past relationship. In the sence that he never really knew me, and honestly I couldn't be more happy that he didn't. Again great job n keep it up!
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    | Posted on 2009-12-27 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]
      I really, really, immensely enjoyed this piece. Everyone has a second nature; and in relationships, when push comes to shove, we always think we know the other person so well. Do we? Most likely not, and they don't know us as well as they might like to think. This is some ways is most likely a good thing; especially if we may have a side that needs to be repressed. Overall, this is a spectacular write, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep it up; drop by and comment some of my work sometime.
    Jeff
    | Posted on 2009-10-08 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]


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