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    dots Submission Name: Nature, and things that Relatedots

    Author: jayisademon
    ASL Info:    22/M/SoILL
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 129/81/88
    Words: 343
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsNature, and things that Relatedots

    Mother Nature, she leaks endorphins,
    putrid, vile, but utterly sweet,
    she calls out pollinate me!

    all I can hear is the constant hum,
    of the everlasting sex between all living things.

    Such Copulation!

    It would be an outrage on my behalf to deny such delicious pleasures,
    but mother nature's belly is swollen like an Egyptian tomb;

    She holds treasures,
    and an understated curse,
    She mumbles half-asleep,
    that if you need twenty dollars,
    just take it out of her purse.

    Mother's womb is polluted,
    there's a river of seed constantly
    making it's voyage to the threshold
    of birth.

    Suddenly the water breaks!

    Out flow the blades of grass,
    constantly germinating,
    and giving off the soft thrill
    of fornication.

    Pulled out kicking and screaming
    come the tulips,
    the filthy perverts,
    Screaming and pleading
    for a bee to draw back and suck
    the pollen from the stamen.

    Mother earth,
    she swells and bleeds,
    and shits all over herself.

    The father(s) of these bastards,
    are nowhere to be found,
    These bright young things,
    they fuck themselves into a frenzy,
    that only whispers and is never loud.

    Just a dull, everlasting drone.
    Faintly glistening the canals
    of your ear.
    If you call me a liar,
    go outside and listen to nature's
    whorish choir!

    You will believe,
    and fall in love with her.
    The dim-witted beauty,
    whose thighs crave for smooth hands,
    to creep ever so slightly,
    to make moves reserved for teenage lovers,
    and children of loss.

    You will moan,
    you will arch your back,
    the muscles will spasm,
    and give way to tremors.

    You will ravage her,
    break the hymen, long ago broke,
    but closed again.
    The reborn virgin, she will give herself;
    all with a red face and placidly trying to cover her exposed body with the bed sheet.

    Don't be fooled,
    she has done this before,
    and she will do it a million times more.
    Say you love her
    " I love Mother Earth, The lolita whore"

    Submitted on 2009-10-08 10:09:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very intense piece of work. I agree with the previous poster, interesting perspective. However, over all, well done.

    Keep on writing!
    | Posted on 2009-10-10 00:00:00 | by Dawnyd | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. That's such an interesting perspective of Mother Earth. I don't think I've ever read anything that contained as much passion and seriousness as this piece. The different use of words and how you describe her so intensely. Well done!
    | Posted on 2009-10-08 00:00:00 | by Rayelyn | [ Reply to This ]

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