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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Story/Comedy
    Total Views: 782
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 948



    Description:
       OCTOBER IS BREAST CANCER AWARNESS MONTH SO PLEASE DO SELF EXAMS PEOPLE AND ENCOURGE THE WMAN IN YOUR LIFE TO DO THEM AS WELL IF YOU HAVE IMPLANTS ASK YOUR PLASTIC SURGEON HOW TO DO TEH EXAM AND HOW IT IS DIFFRENT FOR WOMAN WITH IMPLANTS !


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    Never was well endowed ,even for a larger built girl .
    I have never been huge but wouldnít want to be skinny .
    Tiny girls look a lil fragile to me .
    I thought of what my friends would think ,my family, my preacher.
    The decision was all together too easy in the end.
    I found myself the best surgeon.
    I placed each breast in his well tuned hands.
    I drifted into a chemical sleep sure I was going to wake up new.
    And I did
    Well I think I did I donít remember waking up really .
    Just yesterday I squeezed into my finest leather tank .
    I pulled on my favorite jeans and got in my black muscle car.
    At a stop light I re applied my lipstick ,trailer park red.
    It came to me just then suddenly really
    I have become someone I always was but couldnít be .
    I used to want to be different like everybody else .
    Now I am different but still myself.




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      I didn't like the beginning, I thought I was reading a blog. Towards the end it became literature, and I began liking the message. I love how it ends. I love how it ends. It's like, instead of the norm of changing your personality to better fit your body, you just changed your body to fit your personality!
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    | Posted on 2013-08-16 00:00:00 | by DaniEllis | [ Reply to This ]


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