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    dots Submission Name: I will always love you.dots

    Author: alovesuicide
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    dotsI will always love you.dots

    My eyes blurred, and then suddenly you were mine.
    Right hand was dragged, to your perfect skull.
    I didnít believe, fathom, that you belonged to me.
    You couldnít. You shouldnít. In the end, you werenít.
    Yet I felt your soft skin, and saw your blue eyes.
    I was blessed with your giggles, kissed you through your sighs.
    Now all I clutch to is your memory, gaze at your picture.
    Itís all I have left of you.
    Itís all I want there to be.
    You were never mine; I learnt that from the beginning.
    It was only a matter of time.
    And now youíre gone, forever taking a part of me.

    Submitted on 2009-10-08 18:31:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know the feeling. Benn there done that a few times, and it sucks every time.

    This was a great piece. I liked how it was emotive and painted a picture in my head. Great job, keep it up
    | Posted on 2009-10-09 00:00:00 | by Kaygrl | [ Reply to This ]
      I know exactly how you feel.

    Those sort of experiences suck, yet we grow from them...and we'd never take them back.

    No matter how much misery it put us through, when all is said and done.
    | Posted on 2009-10-08 00:00:00 | by Eyamma | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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