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    dots Submission Name: let me tell yadots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 339/412/257
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 27
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    dotslet me tell yadots
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    i never thought
    it would work out this way
    im waving as you all start to cry
    and i wont lie
    im not even sad
    for i know its not the end
    its the start of something beautiful
    and i wont let these tears
    mare the perfection
    of the sunset in the distance
    and the beating of my heart
    i wave i smile
    and i sigh
    because its the relief i feel lifting off of me
    no longer do i need to keep this front up
    the real me is pouring out
    and let me tell ya
    im in love with her.




    Submitted on 2009-10-08 21:58:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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