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    Author: Xiallia
    ASL Info:    17-F-Missing Osaka[IL]
    Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 3/23/32
    Words: 926
    Class/Type: Story/Vampire
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    Chapter 7: New Husband, New Guardian

    Today...I've been forced to wear this pink ass dress and shit so i feel blah!
    Anyways..My mother and father...making meet my fiancee....oh yeah and Erebus won't be my Knight anymore...THAT'S GREAT!!! not... man....i heard this prince is fucked up as hell...he had his knight, whose a vampire hunter, kill all the vampire in his kingdom. Argh! I can't handle that!!!


    Saika, her mother and father and Dj were all sitting in the Main hall on their thrones. Saika was messing with the bow in her hair. She tugged at it some making it come loose but her mother hit her hand.

    The large wooden doors opened as the prince stepped in with his Knight.
    They both walked up to them and bowed as they introduced themselves.
    "I'm Prince Gray.....I'm the one who is to marry your daughter..." he said. Gray had grey eyes and grey hair. He wore a black cloak with a white suit under it. he smiled to Saika but said gave him a cold look.

    "My name...Is Sei..." he started. Saika arched her eyebrow at the name. "Sei Yamato..." He took off his white hat and smiled. "Nice to see you again Saika. I missed you." Saika smiled. "Damn it Sei...." They shared a laugh as they all stood and went to the Dining room.

    Everybody sat around the large Dining table. Saika's mother and Father Sat Next to each other on one end. Saika and Gray sat next to each other on the other. Sei Stood next to the two at ease. with his hands behind his back.
    "So..." Gray started as he looked to Saika. "How do you feel about you becoming my wife and queen.
    "I fucking don't want to..." She said coldly. "You killed every Vampire in your nation...I--"
    Gray just laughed cutting Saika off. "Vampires are ruining this world. They HAVE to be destroyed. Your Parents agree with me I'm sure."


    Saika's Parents nodded with a smile. "If Vampires weren't here period we'd be happier" Said her Father. Saika's Mother smiled. "It true..."

    Saika Shook her head. Sei looked to her with a slight frown, He then looked to Erebus Who was Standing by the door. Erebus looked coldly at Sei causing him to turn away.

    Gray just laughed again. "You'll get used to the idea...I'll be leaving Sei here if you guys don't mind...He'll Be Saika's new Knight as i stated earlier on" Gray stood to leave. "I'd best be on my way..."

    Saika Mother stood as well. "Saika..walk him out..." She said as she left with Saika's Father when her stood. They left for bed.

    Saika walked Gray out like she was asked. When Gray looked around, making sure they were alone.
    "I'll be seeing you..." Saika said as she started to walk back in when Gray grabbed her arm and pulled her close. He gave her a disturbing glare. "Look here...you WILL be my Wife...no matter what you say...you parents and mine already agreed...so you have no choice!"
    Saika looked at him in shock.
    "Look here...you disobey me on anything...and i swear...I'll have you killed..." He pushed her to the ground roughly and walked off.
    Saika layed there for awhile but slowly stood. She dusted herself off and walked inside going to her room. Finding Sei there instead of Erebus. Erebus was stationed at her fathers and mothers door.

    Saika changed in her bathroom into her nightclothes. Sei laid there already sleeping. Saika climbed into bed and softly cried as she faced the window away from Sei. When Saika looked out the window for a moment she saw a red hat. She sat up and wiped her eyes. She got up and walked over to the window but only to see a red jacket turn the corner towards the garden. She went back to bed and waited for awhile before going to the garden.
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    Saika got up 2 hours later. She crept slowly down the stairs to the entrance of the garden.She opened the door softly and closed it behind her. She walked around seeing if her was still there. She sighed when she found no one. When she walked pass the roses near a corner of the garden she saw someone in red. When she stopped and looked she called out. "Alucard....?" she said softly.

    He looked up from the rose he was smelling and smiled offering it to Saika.
    Saika smiled as she ran up to Alucard and hugged him tightly with tears in her eyes. Alucard widened his eyes in surprised and dropped the rose from the force him her hugging him.
    The rose landed near their feet. He smiled a bit and wrapped his arms around Saika.

    I missed you....He thought as the moon shone over them as it rose.
    Saika buried her face in his chest. I missed you alot....she thought, she stood on her tip-toes slightly as she hugged him. Alucard tightened his hug.
    They both looked at each other and gave a warm smile.

    Sei...on the other hand was watching from the shadows secretly. "I'll be reporting this to Lord Gray..." he said softly as he went back to Saika's room.
    Alucard Quickly looked away from Saika and around. Saika gave him a puzzled look, Alucard just looked back to her smiling. Saika smiled back and rested her head on his chest. It's somthing brewing about...I better be careful when i come here....




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      You know what's going to happen, don't you? The little Dracula Generation is going to grow up and compete with the Gay/Lesbian Community for equal housing rights, non-discriminate laws against the cannibalistic Undead Undead, etc. I blame Anne Rice for this entire fiasco, with her fat slow ass and her melodramatic bull[censored] vampire lore and semi-gay choke-on-vomit "Erotica" for lack of a term that explains gagging while wanting to get [censored]ed in the ass by the dead.... Then came Twilight. Jesus. Even he would rather be nailed up again than endure it.

    With that all said, nice write. The subject matter is horrible, but you carried it off in the woods and did something with it. For that, I thank you.
    | Posted on 2009-10-09 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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