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Submission Name:
Life
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Author:
stormkrow
ASL Info:
20, Male, Michigan UP
Elite Ratio:
2.59 - 51/50/38
Words:
166
Class/Type:
Misc/Misc
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Life
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Ashes to ashes-n-dust to dust these
Are the things that break us
Apart from our powerful lust.
Now this is the time and day
That we all must trust
And ought not break our
Bond of trust
Curiosity killed the cat
Satisfaction brought it back
Now I must come back to the
Lack of slack that
Hacked my back too crack
When I stepped on a crack
Which will extract the lack of slack
Show me the magic Kurt Cobain
So that I can feel your pain
Standing in the rain
Thus your pain my gain
Thru cane too slain
My great done jus
Before the passing train
Some ware down
The lane you shall
Endure my dreadful pain
High atop a crumbling crane
So come on Kurt Cobain
Show me your pain .
Submitted on 2009-10-09 22:20:30
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