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Author: stormkrow
ASL Info:    24/ male / Montello Wi
Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 51 /52 /39
Words: 58
Class/Type: Limerick /Misc
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Ape escape do not escape my fate
A broken gate a shameful slate
Thrown out for bait
Turned away from my own fate
In such a grave estate
So much I hate I feel
Irate why am I late for
My hurtful fate

I must Escape

Submitted on 2009-10-09 22:25:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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