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    dots Submission Name: Escape dots
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    Author: stormkrow
    ASL Info:    24/ male / Montello Wi
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 51/52/39
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Limerick/Misc
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    dotsEscape dots
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    Ape escape do not escape my fate
    A broken gate a shameful slate
    Thrown out for bait
    Turned away from my own fate
    In such a grave estate
    So much I hate I feel
    Irate why am I late for
    My hurtful fate

    I must Escape




    Submitted on 2009-10-09 22:25:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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