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    dots Submission Name: Freedomdots
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    Author: Dawnyd
    Elite Ratio:    4.12 - 140/74/28
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFreedomdots
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    Freedom is a blessing, not always a givin

    Easily can be taken, everything forsaken

    The winds of change are stirring

    The tides of change are whirling

    The trojan horse is there, enemies are everywhere

    They're here to take it all

    They want to see us fall

    If we love our freedom, time we stand as one and become

    Undivided and United

    The truth will is behind us

    Black, white, yellow or brown, it's not too late to turn this around

    Together our voices are strong

    Together we are strong

    Alone we will fail

    Together we prevail








    Submitted on 2009-10-10 08:50:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      duuuuuur I phuckin love america


    Black, white, yellow or brown, it's not too late to turn this around

    too late for the reds I suppose lol

    Nobody outside america with a brain likes your phucking disguisting country
    | Posted on 2009-10-10 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]
      america, [censored] yeah! duuuuuuuuuuurph, you [censored] tick retard cunt
    | Posted on 2009-10-10 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]


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