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Do You Believe

Author: Dawnyd
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Thoughts I had and jotted down.

Do You Believe

Do you believe in one's right to be free?

In a place where you can be anything you dream?

Do you believe in one's right to be heard?

In a place where one is worth his word?

Do you believe in one's right to bear arms?

In a place where one can keep safe from harm?

Do you believe in one's right to choose?

In a place where you may win or you may lose?

Do you believe the colors of America are Red, White, and Blue?

In a place that was made for me and you?

Do you believe this country is worth fighting for?

In a place where the end could be the score?


If you do, it's time to,

Stop wasting time, too busy drawing lines,

Lines keep us divided, this keeps us close minded


The time has come, there's work to be done

Brothers and Sisters of every color,

Standing for America, because they love her!

Submitted on 2009-10-10 08:52:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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