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    dots Submission Name: True To Yourselfdots
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    Author: 13thDisciple
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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       Basically know what your doing before you fall for someone. Do you really want to do this? Is this what you want or what you think you want? Don't be blind sighted or you might get hurt like I did.


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    dotsTrue To Yourselfdots
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    Whenever I see her walk on by
    it just makes me want to cry
    To never love her
    to never hold her
    Its the truth I must face
    but her beauty is something my mind can NEVER erase
    I hate the thought of her being with someone else
    Just to think if she is not already
    she's in somebody else's arms tonight
    All nice and cozy under the covers having a friendly fight
    While I'm gazing at the moon thinking of her all night
    Its true that they say how love can be magical
    But sometimes magic can just be an illusion
    That has just brought me to a whole another level of confusion
    I have a dream that no one else could see
    That dream is now dead, but she won't let me be
    Until I become true to...me




    Submitted on 2009-10-10 10:40:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this poem. It feels honest. On a personal level, I can feel where you are coming from as I've been a part of a magic show or two unfortunately. Love the line "...sometimes magic can just be an illusion."
    | Posted on 2009-10-10 00:00:00 | by shortandre | [ Reply to This ]



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