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    dots Submission Name: The Creepy Mandots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 358
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Creepy Mandots
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    Wince at teeth red stained yet still are green.
    Paranoia was white washed and shoved behind intrigue.
    This was the first mistake to have been found.
    Swing those hands around violently,
    hay makers and desperate screams.
    Touching and feeling never felt so good.
    Biting and degrading morals, raping everything you wanted to save.
    He was there,
    there was nothing you could of done, he was there waiting to force his love.

    "They do not understand us.
    They will start believing in us.
    They will not run from us.
    I will carve my name in their flesh making them pay the toll for us."

    Another scene,
    some more mean intentions.
    Flash of gold dancing with evergreen.
    His silver tongue spun a web of security,
    in a world of pigs they stood above all.
    Puppeteering free will which they charge us for.
    Manipulation of fate.
    This was epic mistake number two.
    For each one of us,
    except you and I,
    we will be the ones to pay for us, the devils game of life.

    "Ignorant fools bow down before us.
    Ignorant fool give us everything you own.
    Ignorant world just spread her legs for our exploitation.
    We will crush their very souls,
    selling them to the devil for his gold."

    A face so familiar, loved and keen.
    Moments come where shame disappears like snow.
    Yet this one is the most crooked and twisted of them all.
    Could it be that our time is up?
    This was mistake number three and the final one to end this trilogy of the evil that is inside of us.
    That face looking back is you.

    "Everyone must die sometime,
    I am going to get my kicks in before I go.
    Everyone owes me something I must take it now.
    Everyone knows I am the most crooked one of all.
    This is my world now,
    this is number one on top and I will hurt you to get what I want.
    This is my time and I will utilize every resource even if it is you."







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      I really like the line "Flash of gold dancing with evergreen", it is a little confusing at first but it's that good kind of intriguing confusing. Right from the opening line it hooks the reader, good work. x
    | Posted on 2011-02-02 00:00:00 | by wilted_flower | [ Reply to This ]


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