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    dots Submission Name: Fading Awaydots
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    Author: Vlanderson
    ASL Info:    18/Female/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    5.68 - 3/3/4
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
    Total Views: 42
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 848



    Description:
       Just a poem that popped into my head. I'm not a poem writter, but sometimes I get a poem in my head and I must write it.


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    Take my breath away, take my soul,
    I have no need for it anyway.
    Take my heart away, I'll let you know,
    I have no need for it anyway.


    I can't breath, I can't see,
    I'm far to deaf to hear myself.
    I can't feel, I'm not the same me,
    I'm far to deaf to hear myself.


    I can't understand the meaning of this.
    Why do I hurt my friends, I only want to give.
    I try to much, and now I only have one wish.
    to see my friends rise and live.


    So take my life away, take my soul,
    I never needed it anyway.
    Steal my heart away, I'll let you know,
    I never needed it anyway.


    Fade away!!!
    Fade away!!
    Fade away!
    Fade away......




    Submitted on 2009-10-11 02:54:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thank you for your comment. This came to me when I heard the news one of my friends tried to do something crazy. So I wasn't very confident of myself. My friends come first.
    | Posted on 2009-10-26 00:00:00 | by Vlanderson | [ Reply to This ]
      This is me...pretty much exactly...you're my new best friend lol i love you!
    | Posted on 2009-10-26 00:00:00 | by Ivellios | [ Reply to This ]


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