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My Suicide

Author: juss_kriss
ASL Info:    23/F/Canada
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i guess you can say this is about being in a destructive relationship. one you know that you don't need but yet can't leave.

My Suicide

baby, your lips are like cocaine
just one kiss and i can't get enough
i go insane, just craving for your touch
the need to feel your skin against mine
only grows stronger and i run right back to you
when i can't resist any longer
there's nothing i can say, no words to explain
why i'm addicted to you when i know

your love is my suicide
every time i'm with you
a part of me dies
i always seem to lose
and it's always my heart
with another bruise
how much can i take
till i can't take anymore
where will you be
when my heart hits the floor

i didn't know how strong it was
i didn't know how sweet you could taste
but now i know and i can't let go
don't walk away, you're my only escape
from this world i don't belong in, save me
save me from this world full of pain
you're my path of self destruction and i know
that there's no way to save myself because


your lips, my cocaine
you keep me from going insane
i need you, i hate you
i can't get enough of you
i will take you till i can't take anymore
till my heart hits the floor
it's nother but another bruise
what do i have left to lose when


your love is my suicide
every time i'm with you
a part of me dies


Submitted on 2009-10-11 04:04:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Awe thanks Sarah! I'm debating about posting some of the other lyrics I've soon as I find where I've saved them haha. So when I do...hopefully you'll read them!!


p.s., I definately am going to start putting my lyrics to music. I'm getting back into singing and my friends' going to teach me how to play guitar so soon I'll start doing that. You'll def. be one of the first to hear them!
| Posted on 2009-11-11 00:00:00 | by juss_kriss | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow. This brings back memories. As always Great write Kriss. Your lyrics always paint such a good emotional picture and these do just that. This is a great piece and I cant wait to see more from you, now that you're back lol. Great piece, keep writing.


P.S. You so need to put ur lyrics to music, I'm dying to hear some of your songs.
| Posted on 2009-11-02 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]

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