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    Author: Randa04
    ASL Info:    19/Female/NC
    Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 21/63/77
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    How is it that my thought's seem to vanish..
    While I try to plan them on paper?
    Why am I so tyed up in a situation I have full control over?




    Submitted on 2009-10-11 23:03:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know exactly what you mean, I think when trying to concentrate your thoughts onto paper sometimes you over think it. The most proud I ever am of anything I write I do it by feeling an not thought. I think a strong enough feeling writes itself. You are not alone in your problem, an its a damn hard one to overcome.
    | Posted on 2009-10-13 00:00:00 | by Cathartus | [ Reply to This ]


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