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    dots Submission Name: Danny Girldots
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    Author: TheMaddness
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 546
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Sorry
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       Well, im currently in houston right now. And my aunts sister has a kid named daniella. Well daniella lives with her grandma, and when her mom comes around she doesnt even act like daniella exists. Her mom is a prostitute and has another baby but uses it against the dude as a power move right. Well, i saw daniella today, and she used to be a happy fun loving kid. Now she just sits quiet and empty with a blank stare, idk, this is what came out.


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    dotsDanny Girldots
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    Composite sketch cohere to coherance single

    lined systematic holocaust of the human spirit

    devoured in mirrors and stereotyped fears

    take a deep look to see the shed of gods

    tears in a matter of years you'll hear it some

    perservered this some constructed and

    engineered this clearly i see through the fake

    superficial appearence these motherfuckers

    fronting as parents children growing up

    orphaned of themselves theys embarassed

    socially fucked up trying to get by in a world

    where theres no clearance and when the

    world falls down its strict to pessisism

    when they were young what they had seen

    they dont talk about its not like nobody

    would listen why even bother a mention

    to them lifes full of hell evil and orphaned

    dissention a participant to what most would

    call an altered dimension doomed to a life of

    drugs sex no respect as a woman is it

    to this hell one day i hope you visit possibly

    save someone who truly has to live it

    Morbid orchards scortched earth sits
    loosly on sald dome composites
    mindless frivolous but i do ask dear lord
    when does suffering like this get to cease
    to exist


    My experience isnt one of my own but a girl

    only nine years old she sees her mom

    everyday and for everyday she gets cold

    disconnected with life so far and alone the

    pain creaks and moans and its her mom she

    doesnt even know but she sees how things

    are knows her mom works things real hard in

    the back of the bar or car or in a dark spot

    behind Mcarty bulevard take another xanax u

    retard in the situation your in i cant beleive

    the life it takes no happiness cant be made

    when you see your mom some slave no

    matter what you do its like at nine years old

    destined for the grave not much of a chance

    is givin thank god for family for showing her

    the life she's living but its not enough cus

    deep inside she's secretly empty and it dont

    help when her mom uses the other baby

    simply to war while in truth making herself

    more the enemy no resembling and im not

    pretending see this is the portrait of the

    modern amercian family i cant stand it or

    breath and the hate inside you have no idea

    how much it breeds i feel sorry for this

    innocent young human being

    for this innocent young human being

    for this innocent young human being

    for this innocent young human being


    Morbid orchards scortched earth sits
    loosly on sald dome composites
    mindless frivolous but i do ask dear lord
    when does suffering like this get to cease
    to exist




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