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A Cup Runneth Over

Author: CrypticBard
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Words: 53
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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A Cup Runneth Over

The well has not gone dry,
less frequented maybe
by both the drawers and
the occasional passersby.

The stones are loose;
between them, mortar dissolves-
by clement or contrary
weather on seasonal cue.

The vessel is parched
and longs for its lover
by pulley once lowered
its rope frayed with disuse.

Submitted on 2009-10-12 05:33:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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