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    dots Submission Name: The Firstdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
    Total Views: 527
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 418



    Description:
       Outside the downtown Pville apartment the rain comes for a visit with a smile to share ;-)


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    dotsThe Firstdots
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    Welcome first rain of Autumn
    Cleansing the parched landscape
    Summer
    Changing colors
    Vibrant Hues
    Materialize
    Expressing Muse

    Cool Air
    Water
    Life
    Anew

    Thank you first rain of Autumn
    Nurturing the land for hibernation
    F
    A
    L
    L

    Snow capped peaks
    Nature seeks
    Solace




    Submitted on 2009-10-12 22:05:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      As Autumn beckons, this piece of yours deserves more reads and comments.

    Very descriptive and written with skill.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2011-08-23 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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