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    dots Submission Name: The Firstdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
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       Outside the downtown Pville apartment the rain comes for a visit with a smile to share ;-)

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    dotsThe Firstdots

    Welcome first rain of Autumn
    Cleansing the parched landscape
    Changing colors
    Vibrant Hues
    Expressing Muse

    Cool Air

    Thank you first rain of Autumn
    Nurturing the land for hibernation

    Snow capped peaks
    Nature seeks

    Submitted on 2009-10-12 22:07:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nothing quite like watching the falling rain, as Mother Nature prepares for yet another season.

    | Posted on 2011-12-02 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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