Fantastic imagery and great structure both lend to be a great support to the whole piece, the abstract appearance personifies each new fall as it is an abstract experience each time, never can we expect exactly how our lives might twist into perfection or reach into shambles.. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks.
seriously one of the best reads i've read in a very long time...simply splendid...truly perfect
there for i have no critique for you just the way i felt it and how i'll savor it.
i've never been the biggest fan of the Fall but i have always Loved the colours<-(i'm Canadian:) this poem gave me a bit of warmth toward the wet part of this season...peeling back the layers of change and looking at them for what they are...a true necessity of nature.
you have perfect meter and the use of slight rhyme combined with your phrasing...i'm speechless and this is starting to become nothing but buttkissing praise so i'm just going to Thank You and leave now
I grew up on the High Plains, where the farmers and ranchers were usually praying for rain! I know the feeling of dreading the drouth, and the absolute insane joy of having rain fall after a dry period!
This poem reminded me of my youth! Nice write Tif!